What is wrong with this sentence?

[tamaranth]

Perhaps more striking, however," he adds, "is that those executives also say that there may be even more embarrassing revelations to come about the way that News of the World journalists obtained information about other individuals.

[quote from BBC, here, indicating that 'News International executives privately say they accept that the basic allegations are true'.]


The word 'embarrassing'. More apt: criminal, unethical, underhand, distressing, nauseating, vile ...

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[zotz]

It's also, as a sentence, not nearly long enough. A couple of years might do the trick.

[drasecretcampus.livejournal.com]

I'm guessing the more embarrassing stuff involves the police, information and cash, and that a certain former press secretary is being hung out to dry by NotW/Newscorp - going back to something RW/RB said to the select committee

[drasecretcampus.livejournal.com]

There presumably not being a connection between the money and earlier investigations drawing a blank

[houseboatonstyx.livejournal.com]

My guess before reading the rest: it needs a comma between 'come' and 'about'. Or better perhaps, make it 'come concerning.'

[http://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/]

Goodness, but if they didn't say 'embarrassing', they might have to look like they cared about more than the impact on their profit margins...
Vile.