Murdoch forces normal people to agree with the Guardian

the Daily Mash on NOTW phone-hacking

And with Britain at once both surprised and yet not surprised at all, attention has turned to how other national newspapers are reacting to the thing they would totally have done if their private investigators were not complete bloody amateurs...."Thank goodness the Daily Mail covered it by making the thing absolutely everyone is talking about the eighth story on the front page of their website, below the heart-stopping drama of a Royal canoe race and a couple of reassuringly familiar stories about foreign scroungers."

Edit to add:
- News of the World hacking - what you can do (Guardian)
- challenge Rupert Murdoch's bid to dominate our media (Avaaz)
- Tweet at NOTW advertisers

What is wrong with this sentence?

Perhaps more striking, however," he adds, "is that those executives also say that there may be even more embarrassing revelations to come about the way that News of the World journalists obtained information about other individuals.

[quote from BBC, here, indicating that 'News International executives privately say they accept that the basic allegations are true'.]
( what is wrong with the sentence? In my opinion ... )