I didn't find the modern language too intrusive in Half a Soul -- perhaps because it's mostly in descriptions rather than dialogue? (Compare with the review book I'm slogging through, which has Bronze Age people saying 'OK' and 'I'll take it from here'...)
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Date: Thursday, February 29th, 2024 09:43 am (UTC)